❴Reading❵ ➷ Breakdown Motel Author Ty Marton – Horse-zine.co.uk

Breakdown Motel chapter 1 Breakdown Motel , meaning Breakdown Motel , genre Breakdown Motel , book cover Breakdown Motel , flies Breakdown Motel , Breakdown Motel dc4301ae2dfbd Stranded By The Side Of The Road With A Broken Down Vehicle In The Middle Of The Hot New Mexico Desert, Danny Major Figured That, At Very Least, Nothing Else Could Go Wrong Then He Arrived At Motel XBefore Long, The Young Man Is Captured, Restrained, And Pushed Beyond His Physical, Mental, And Sexual Limits, Thrown Into A Twisted World Of Bondage, Sadomasochism, And Discipline, A World Where Survival Means Submission Can Danny Escape His Torturous Fate Or Is He Destined To Be Broken Down Into The Perfect Slave AUTHOR S NOTE This Is An Adult Story Focused On Themes Of Bondage, Discipline, And Sadomasochism Between Adult Men Subject Matter Includes Explicit Sexual Activity And Increasingly Intense BDSM Scenes Captivity, Fisting, Dubious Consent, Watersports, Electro Torture, Enemas Etc , And Is Intended Purely As Erotic Fantasy For Mature Readers If Such Material Offends You, Or If It Is Illegal To Own Or Read Such Material In The Area Where You Live, Then You Should Find Another Title


10 thoughts on “Breakdown Motel

  1. says:

    mark monday s GUIDE TO WRITING NONCONSENSUAL GAY BDSM EROTICA FOR MARK MONDAY 1 employ realism for example, a fist up a basically untouched ass with no damage like for real I don t think so unless we re dealing with fantasy creatures or people with special ass powers, the lack of reality in this bit took me right out of the story being perplexed is not being turned on.2 maybe not 100% evil cruelty from beginning to end I dunno perhaps it s just me, but I like a little something to lighten up the darkness just a little a good deal of time was spent making our victim sweet, normal whatever that means , excited about the post college world to come and happily making plans, he s just a nice kid about to start his life, you know and later he even bonds with a fellow slave, plans to escape, etc all that info designed to hammer you in the gut when you realize there is no hope all of that unrelenting brutality began to depress me rather than interest me and no escape in the end sweet Jesus I m all for exploring the dark side but honestly total hopelessness is not sexy being depressed is not being turned on.3 goofy fantasies are not reality I could perhaps get down with a sex novel that details a realistic situation or relationship that turns fucked up, power dynamics that turn brutal and cruel, sadism, etc it may not even turn me on but at least it will be interesting shit like that happens and intense psychodrama can be compelling but a motel that is a sex farm slash slave training ground that houses pretty young lads led to their annihilation by an evil trans woman temptress named Trixie cough the whole situation is so improbable it should have been set in some fantasy world written by Ann Rice under a pseudonym or set in some war torn Salo type era and functioning as a sickening commentary on fascism but brutal Masters who run a sex farm and relax by wearing corny leather harnesses and leather chaps and who utter corny lines right out of some corny bdsm porno come on now, that s just lame being stricken by a bout of derisive laughter is not being turned on.4 evil trans women named Trixie not hot for mark monday now don t get me wrong, I have nothing against the various trans communities and for the most part I think they are awesome heck I ve dated trans women myself back in the day so this is not a turned on turned off by all the trans gressiveness get it type issue but a hot trans lady with a huge dick who is a part of this evil crew of boy slavers and who turns out to be just as cruel and just as corny as the rest and who is also named Trixie does not work for me not sure why exactly except it just seemed so unrealistic and goofy that yet again I was taken out of the story and found myself rolling my eyes and getting annoyed being irritated is not being turned on.5 trite is trite, even in nonconsensual gay bdsm erotica and one thing that is really trite is the tale of a victim who embraces their victimization and realizes that they are born to be a slave, that their fate is to be someone s property, and that is oh such a humiliating secret turn on for them yeah I know that that mentality exists and the idea of being someone s property is a common enough fantasy but the key word here is common perhaps I have just read too much nonconsensual gay bdsm erotica, cough, but this scenario is PLAYED OUT these victims who turn into slaves and who secretly love it and who eventually embrace their slave destiny and who say the same damn things in every damn story of this type ugh they all talk and think the same repetition does not make the heart grow fonder and it certainly does not make mark monday s dick grow harder trite is not hot being bored by the same regurgitated nonsense I ve read in so many other places is not being turned on.6 don t waste a perfectly good book title cause yeah, that s a pretty good title if you are not writing Nonconsensual Gay BDSM Erotica specifically for mark monday, well I suppose you can adjust this Guide as you see fit sigh.


  2. says:

    Wow This one is creeeepy Not really sure how to review it, other than to say I liked it a lot It is like a bad horror flick mixed with somewhat erotic and hot at times bdsm slavery I felt myself cringing at some of the punishments and treatments and losing hope right along with Danny and the nine Eric is something else, right up to the end I really wish it didn t end where it did, and that I had a sequel to jump right into continuing the story I m glad I was finally able to get my hands on this book.


  3. says:

    This is a good start I enjoyed Mr Marton s sad tortures of a straight boy and forcing him into a cock sucking sex slave It was depraved and deviant This story was a very fast read, less than 30 minutes The story flowed There was a decent amount of showing rather than telling Definitely a niche BDSM taboo story For me there were a few things that weren t realistic eagle scout Really, I don t believe it Fisting on a virgin Really, I don t believe it but it is still hot.Well Slave number X there s a reason why your momma told you not to talk to strangers The ending leaves it as a possible second story Honestly, the ending didn t surprise me I guess I m too jaded I look forward to the second story I want to know what happens next.


  4. says:

    Without getting the chance to build up some kind of emotional connection to between the characters a BDSM story like this strung together cruelties sadistic fantasies increasing in intensity from chapter to chapter is neither hot nor terrifying it simply is justmeh.


  5. says:

    If this is what people spend their time fantasizing aboutand the subconscious guides our overt actionsthen it s no wonder we live in such a sick sick world.


  6. says:

    Giving it a uhmmm 3 stars I think Am kinda confused how I should rate this one Not tat I dislike it But I don t exactly find it memorable That s where the problem is for me I need the images to burn itself into my mind and not leave me anytime soon for it to make it into my 4 to 5 stars rating It does have some hardcore BDSM to satisfy those who craves it Like the fisting of a virgin ass left my jaw hanging as my brain was too busy debating whether that is even a possible feat , piercing, pissing, enema, branding, canning and such.Tried as I might to treat this book as a fantasy only hence there is the wide leeway of anything is possible Therefore, I did kept reminding myself to maintain an open mindset when I am reading it as per the advice of other readers based on their reviews Anyhow, I still couldn t get pass the niggling aspect where the protagonist, Danny had suddenly shift into submissive slutty mode although he is supposed to be straight and very innocent to all these extreme D S stuff being forced upon him Lol, I even thought I missed something along the way Why is he being so pliable and accepting all out of a sudden Shouldn t he even try to question himself a little Even a closeted gay would have questions Then again, maybe Danny s little head has dominant control over him OR because this is supposed to be a novella hence once again there s the famous race against time factor here If you could overlook the bit of OOC ness here, it s all pretty entertaining in a way I quite like it and don t hate it since I did gave it a 3 stars Another thing is that if you are looking for a good healthy dose of angst, I don t think you could find it here.


  7. says:

    One of the hottest M M books I ve read to date Totally kinky, non con dub con sex abounds, and definitely NOT for the faint of heart This is NOT a romance, PWP, and although there isn t much plot, there is an interesting psychological component to the novella Well written, only minor typos here and there but nothing distracting This is kinky M M slave BDSM erotica at its best VERY MILD SPOILERS view spoiler Danny is a college grad on his way to take the perfect job cross country When he picks up a hot little number female at a truck stop, he figures the cards are just stacked in his favor Life is good But the sexy little thing leads him headlong into a sex slavery ring and soon Danny is on his way to taking his place amongst the other male slaves Without giving away a wonderful plot twist towards the end, suffice it to say that I am looking forward to the sequel hide spoiler


  8. says:

    Twisted all to hell if you like non con then this fantasy will than satisfy This is not meant in any way to represent reality at least any reality I know and it is purely in fantasy land for me ATM, fisting of a virgin, etc etc the way it happened is just fantasy not in any way meant to represent reality It s like the insta love so popular in romance I might enjoy it in my books but in real life it just ain t so Harsh, non relenting, and with new and darker depravities just around the corner this is strictly for the Depraved Minds Club group I got mine on Smashwords for 2.99.


  9. says:

    1.5 StarsThe author s note pretty much sums up the themes in this abduction slavery story, to be clear, this is definitely extremely explicit Non Con BDSM except I would add to the subject matter that there is also mentions of explicit consensual sexual activity between a transsexual and a man, in addition to the non con and dub con sadomasochism between adult men.Now that that s out of the way, I ll agree with another reviewer that there is nothing really erotic about this story, while it does depict abuse and captivity situations, there is little, if any in the way of hurt comfort and romance.I was hoping for a decent amount of hurt comfort and found none, and what bit of romantic intrigue between slaves, or any characters for that matter, was unsatisfactory within this story.This is essentially Non Con PWP with BDSM, and could be somewhat trashy by some people s definition be warned.My summary PROS If you re looking to get hot off of quickly escalated forced sex slave submission written with no apologies for lack of development or intimacy and need a quick fix, then this FANTASY Non Con is for you.Or perhaps you can enjoy this from a sub slave angle, it after all involves the kidnapping and abuse of an albeit suspiciously compliant hetero male Or if you just simply enjoy straight boys forced into into the seedy underworld of sexual slavery, torture and pain, you ll get that with this.CONS No character depth, the abducted is rather devoid of an internal struggle, not very believable events between the impalpable virgin fisting scene and the accelerated transition from straight boy to easily docile cock hungry slave boy Lousy dialogue No intimacy, no hurt comfort, which is my biggest complaint Only a little dub con.WHAT I LIKED BEST That I didn t pay than 2.99 to read this.WARNING Do not read this story if you are sensitive to or disagree with non con torture and pain and other extremes.


  10. says:

    I enjoyed this than I thought I would I don t mind the gay erotica, but sometimes the kidnapped and forced sex slave stuff gets to me But not in this one While Danny nka X does find himself in a bad situation, he s also seemed to find some sort of tormentor who doesn t want to harm him Too much, anyway I liked the story a lot I knew going in it wasn t a long story, but I was actually wishing that it was longer because I enjoyed the characters and the look inside the bdsm world that was set up in this book The ending gives us the feeling it might be just the start, and I m hoping I m right in that assumption, because I would love to read


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